|Reviews for broken promises|
| Ivy Climbroe 12/14/12 . chapter 1
This is beautifully written..
| Wonder46 8/18/12 . chapter 1
Really nice poem!
| MADdreamers 8/12/12 . chapter 1
This is great and really creative. I like how you formatted the poem, it emphasized certain words or points. Great job! I have a question you don't have to answer though, why are the words in italics and broken important? I'm curious of your muse. It's so interesting.
| Mylilblackpen 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I really loved this piece and I think my heart just sunk a little lower, it was that powerful. I loved it and I think it's a great piece - promise (see what I did there ;)) me you won't edit this. Love, love, love, love, loved this piece :)
| LoveBambi16 8/10/12 . chapter 1
This poem is really powerful! It also gives it a really haunting feeling to it. I think it's beautiful. Keep it up!
| thetabbykitteh 8/10/12 . chapter 1
Amazing I loved this, and the way it was written seemed to work perfectly.