This is beautifully written..

Really nice poem!

This is great and really creative. I like how you formatted the poem, it emphasized certain words or points. Great job! I have a question you don't have to answer though, why are the words in italics and broken important? I'm curious of your muse. It's so interesting.

I really loved this piece and I think my heart just sunk a little lower, it was that powerful. I loved it and I think it's a great piece - promise (see what I did there ;)) me you won't edit this. Love, love, love, love, loved this piece :)

This poem is really powerful! It also gives it a really haunting feeling to it. I think it's beautiful. Keep it up!

Amazing I loved this, and the way it was written seemed to work perfectly.