This poem is extremaly beautiful. It's impact with so much emotion and passion, it leaves me speechless. I love how this poem is also written in such a lovely format, and if thought into more can be an awesome story. Outstnading job, keep it up :D

simple yet very well thought out, like it! :)

Wow, that was, of course, amazingly written.
Don't worry about him because you have something so much better now. And something just gives me the feeling he won't be moody or randomly ignore you. Something tells me he is going to have a lot more in common with you and love you for who you are.

LOOOOVED it! A stroke of brilliance magnatized! at first i tought it'd be like there goes my life the song by kenny chesney and i was a little worried, but i was totally wrong! i loved every part of this, totally original and totally brilliant! Fantastic work!