|Reviews for Broken Things|
| simpleplan13 8/11/12 . chapter 1
"I made them mine, you see."... something about the phrasing with this line just seems off.
I like the piece though. I think the concept of only having broken things is a really great one. I also like how you transitioned into it being about breaking someone in the future. The tone is great too. Just straightforward and matter of fact. Nice job.
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| hecountedstars 8/11/12 . chapter 1
what a lonely life. "you will come to me in pieces" is a beautiful line because it plays with the idea of free will. love this.