|Reviews for Deceiver|
| simpleplan13 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I didn't like the format. The capitalization seemed off and I didn't like the lack of punctuation throughout. The rhyming also seemed forced in spots.
I did like the emotion though. Very angry. I also loved the ending it was so funny!
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| hecountedstars 8/11/12 . chapter 1
love the rhythm, especially in the last four lines