Hahaha, well, okay.

I have just once complain. The chapter titles are creepy.

Other than that, it was pretty hilarious.

The whole reunion was hilarious! Pretty good, pretty good, nice introduction.

Her infinite crossbreeding was epic, haha

Laughing. Laughing arse off. Arse in the process of being laughed off. This is genius, pure genius. How about she can see the future and foresees a terrible enemy coming and killing her love, but she gives up her immortality and dies for him but resurrects because she's that powerful XD

my sides are splitting. Holy crap... one moment while I try to formulate a cohesive thought after that gang-bang of ridiculousness. Okay. That is just becoming no less than genius. A true mockery of the MarySue/GarySue epidemic. I love it. Next you should throw in the usual battle in which she does not receive a single scratch and the overly-disgusting and disfigured villain that will do ANYTHING to take her as his bride. Or better yet... the pregnancy scare that turns out to just be a bad case of gas after the object of her affection ruins his life to be with her and the "baby". I cannot WAIT to read more.

oh gods this is hilarious.

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this is good. can't wait to see what is next

Laughing so hard I almost peed. Please keep writing.

Oooh don't forget that he watches her while she sleeps, and that she looks beautiful even when she cries, and that she alwyas looks amazing no matter what she wears, and that her wings turn into tattoos when she retracts them, and that she can change her hair colour and each different colour has a different power, and that the guy is the hottest guy ever and probably has some powers of his own, and that he loves her because he sees PAST all her powers and amazingness and sees a beautiful, kind person... Those were all the examples I can think of. Love this story so far please continue!

I defiantly see the influence of My Immortal here! You've done a great job, the few things I can suggest are describe everyone's clothes a *lot* more, I also think Star is long overdue to spill an overly tragic back-story to the boy she just met. Maybe give her a few climate-inappropriate predators for pets too? Ohh, and you can't leave out the villain who does nothing but obsess over her! Gosh, I'm overflowing with ideas. This looks like it will be (and already is) hilarious. Remember not to make the plot too coherent! And update soon!