It's interesting & I like this story A LOT, but it bothers me that Mage (I love her name by the way) always plays the victim- get her to apologize sometimes too or at least not some weak, stupid apology.
Well keep writing cause this is getting pretty good.

ooh, viktor is defintely an interesting character! go get 'im byron. :)

Awww! Cute! But, personally, I think you should show more of Mage's relationship with Sebastian. THey're cute, but it seems like eventually you're going to break them up so that she can date Byron. ): I don't know which couple I like better but I know that I don't want Sebastian to get hurt.

Hi, I definitely loved the story. Saw your story and was worth staying up late to finish the chapters. Just the right amount of cheesy romance, conflict and fillers. Loved it and worth following. Update soon and cheers to your story and writing. Well done.

hey, who knew? mage and i are both sensitive to such scents! :)
looks like she's starting to get softer around byron... hehe.

I'm dying, I truly am. You know a story's gold when the author opens up with a chuck Norris rant. Love. now to read what else you have in store...

I loved this chapter :) It's great to see Mage finally accept Byron as a friend, even if she hadn't admitted it out loud.

Congratulations on the job, btw!

*claps, claps* that's all i have to say.

Hey there!

So I think you've got a really good story going so far. Your "Demon Lady" is so unusual and so vibrant. I love the idea of the anger management wristband!

I'm glad she finally gave in to Byron, cause I was kinda starting to hate her for being so unreasonable about everything. You brought it back though, with her agreeing to be friends and also with the awesome movie scene.

I just noticed that we have the same number of chapters - not counting your prologue or whatever you call it - and almost the same number of reviews. Teehee.

Anyway, enjoying this so far, please update soon!

OH MY GOD THAT TOTALLY KILLED ME! Even I can't decide between the two-the only thing holding me back from totally rooting for Seb (I ALWAYS go for the guy bestfriend-if there's none, I go for the most hated enemy, if he truly has a heart of gold) is the fact that Mage is hesitant. I don't really believe in plunging yourself in something you're not really sure in. But well, risks have to be taken. I truly love all the characters here, and I love your writing! Well, I'm babbling, so forgive me. Love this!

this is THE best chapter you have so far! you. must. update. soon!

Move on sista!

I'm starting to love this! Yup, Mage is not the most adorable character by society's standards, but nobody like Mary Sues anyway. I'm looking forward to some character development.

Aaaaah! How dare you tell me there's more and not post it!
No really, loved the chapter again. I'm looking forward to the next one! It's one of my favourite stories!

Keep going i really like her character! slightly reminds me of my inner dialogue!