Interesting. I liked the end although I am quiet the believer that all stories should end happy, no matter what it takes. It did take me by surprise at the end when the prince was already married and his princess being a psychopath and pyromaniac, that was just plain hilarious so it made up for the non- fairytale ending. It would be cool if you could expand this story and make it longer, it seemed really fast paced, but it was only meant to be a one-shot so its Ok, just a suggestion.

Now that was one way to put it! Loved the moral *laughing off my wits*