|Reviews for Oil fires|
| True Talker 8/11/12 . chapter 1
Okay, even though some of this made me think - Is this me? I am concerned about the one who wrote this. Please just be okay. PLEASE be okay SERIOUSLY.
| simpleplan13 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I like the stream of consciousness here. It works well to show that this is really the inner thoughts of the narrator, but the items seem to connect and flow together in a way that makes sense.
I like the ending too. It really left me wondering what happened with the narrator.
Your descriptions of things are really great as well.
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