|Reviews for Out with the Old|
| Road to Anywhere 8/12/12 . chapter 1
I like this a lot so far! The storytelling is kind of reminiscent of classic novels, which lends this a kind of nostalgic charm. :D Very nice work! Can't wait to see more!
| Mercyette 8/12/12 . chapter 1
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I like how human you are able to make Nicky. Rather than just have a perfect businessman (and I see too many perfect characters on this site), I think you've really been able to create a likeable character. Everyone goes through a time in their life where they feel like they're stuck in a rut. This makes Nicky quite relatable, I think.
I also like the clincher that you ended the chapter with. I think that you'll really be able to keep readers racing to the next chapter that way. Good job.