Barney and Beau are absolutely charming characters, their dynamic feels real and makes me laugh every single time.

I found the change in perspective very well done. Usually it causes readers to go back and reread but I found myself reading further and figuring out quite easily who we had switched to...'cabin' being a very good hint from you. Interesting.

I must say, the first chapter is a doozy. I found myself straightening in my seat and stuck staring at the screen wondering if it was real or not... If all the allusions were just descriptors or pointing to the truth. Very creepy.

Ahhhh, whats the end of that last sentence? :o ahaha I think this chapter was incredibly written, so many details going on in her head... I like Beau, he actually seems more concerned about her than Barney does.. Please update again soon! :)

Woah, okay, please update really soon! :) I would love to read more! :D

Who's dead? Future chapters will answer that question!