That was some really funny shit man, had me rolling, and the fight scenes were well paced too. The dialogue felt natural (most of the time) and was really humorous. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but those can be fixed with editing ("I drifted off into to sleep..."). Overall a great read, keep it coming.

I really liked the first sentence! Not that I dident like the whole story, but the poem at the beginning was my favorite part. And this totally put Santa in a new light to me...hope my siblings don't read this too soon. I really liked it!

My favorite character...Paindeer of course! LOL Your descriptions brought the character to life, very well written author. Chills, drama, and crazy with humor.

This is absolutely mindblowingly amazing. The creativity and originality that it took to create this is nothing short of awesomeness!