Dawwwwwwwwwwww and james, and maria! and alyssa. but then the baby and aww!

Awe, no it wasn't corny. Lol I loved the ending, it was...unexpected, And creative. And I loved that he stayed faithful, even when he still had those feelings that rose when he talked to Maria.

Oh, and I absolutely love that song. I think you used it in your story well (:

Alyssa