Nicely done as always.

This is such a beautiful poem. Actually, probably one of the best I've ever read on fictionpress. But it's so sad and so terrible that it happened... and I'm so sorry. The worst thing is when friends die, because it's like they're not a person anymore. Just a body that looks so unfamiliar. You really captured this perfectly...
No one deserves to die, especially not kids and teens. Again, I'm so sorry this happened...

This makes me think.