update soon!

great job :)

still good! now i'm starting to like it more!

keep updating :)

great chapter

good job

niiice

interesting concept, although still not really my thing. but i'll review cause you deserve credit:3

I've enjoyed your story so far. I'm curious as to why the people of the opposing group are called "Ninjas".
Btw, "alright" and "allright" should always be two words- "all right".
Keep writing, I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. :)

I'm interested in what happens next.
You did a wonderful job developing your characters.

niccceeeeeee!

I think this is well written, and I can definitely see this plot going in a good direction. You should try to write up another chapter soon, I'm excited to see where this story goes.:)