the guy told thanks for the chapter hope for more soon.

I have only started reading this and its sounding really interesting. I love the work you've dobe with your other stories and i cant wait to read the next chapter and the rest of this story, keep up the awesome work! :D xx

This was an amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what you have planned for them! Omg, and the doctor got caught?! I must know what happens! Update soon!

-Sydney

I love your stories, and I'm sure this one will be as amazing as the others.

I'm really liking this :) Definitely looking forward to more!

Lol this is why you shouldn't fall asleep w/ a concussion

Awesome chapter! I look forward to see where this is going!

-Sydney

Oh my god. This is going to be brilliant, i just know it.

I hope-well never mind she can't die. I wonder what's wrong with her. Oh Dear She had somewhere to go why did you leave us with this cliff hanger.

Ahhh loved it!

I used to be a silent reader because I didn't have an account while you were writing Opposite Ends Of The Spectrum (on a side note, that's my absolute favorite story here on Fictionpress) and I hadn't really embraced the idea of reviewing, so I never commented.

However, now I've finally decided to review and what better way to do it than for your new story? I must say that I'm liking it...a lot. The plot line is original and although I hate change in POV's, you appear to be the exception, because you've convinced me.

Great first two chapters. I really cannot wait for more!

Oh my gosh, you do not know how excited I was to see that you had updated! Just yesterday I was wondering when I'd get to read another chapter. I'm definitely not disappointed. This story is so good and so intriguing.

I already love all the characters, even slightly sleazy Tim. I'm actually really curious about Will and Natalie's back story. He seems to speak/think of her fondly, but at the same time I definitely sense some tension in his perception of Natalie. Chloe from what we know of her seems adorable and obviously intelligent. I can't wait to get to know her better...assuming she survives (hah). Such a great, captivating cliff hanger! I must get my hands on the next chapter stat. Great writing so far! Definitely looking forward to seeing how the rest of this story unfolds.

Please update as soon as possible! This is so good I just need to know what happens to her! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl

Love this. Please update soon.

I like where you are taking this. A little bit of character development and a cliffhanger! Somehow you manage to make the introduction to the story not boring (which I must say is the hardest part).