The plot seems awesome...I like the way you detailed out everything...keep it up..update the next chapter soon...

Good plot! This is an interesting story! Although you used "now" waaaayyy too much! By the time i read half the story; it got on my nerves. Also add more details. What did Jason's room look like? What were the characters wearing? Anyway, other than that good story! -DarkAngelReviews

nice :) i like it