Hey! U decided 2 post this story online? How come u never told me? Anyway, before u post things READ IT THROUGH. Don't, worry, I'll be ur editor. XD

:'( poor girl! losing her family like that :(

hey! awesome beginning :) I really liked this it's so relatable and sad hopefully it will be happy soon:) I was wondering since I am the 1st REVIEW YA! if I could beg enough for you to maybe put me in :D pretty please? if not that's ok I understand it's your story xD if u already have someone planned for the roommate that's fine of not can I be her? if so can I be another student? again if not just let me know lol my OC
NAME: Mazarine (it means blue gem or ice or something) if I need a last name -Minx

POWER: (if I can have one plzplzplzplzplzplz)
I would like to control water and ice. and air if possible (like avatar the last airbender, watch it if u haven't) If I can't pm me and let me know :)

PERSONALITY: kind, loyal, clumsy, shy but once you get to know me AWESOME xD also I love the water haha big surprise

AGE: whatever age amy is. :)

BACKROUND: YOU can make one up whatever you think is goo but I would prefer to be a ally in the story even if I start out misunderstood or EVIL xD

amazing story I noticed you wrote Loom instead of look I there but other than that GREAT!