|Reviews for She Lay In The Grass|
| Toni 8/18/12 . chapter 1
| Archia 8/17/12 . chapter 1
That ends on such a great note. When it was all disappearing I thought it was going to end on that note, but then it became positive again and I really liked that. I enjoyed how the sun was used as a metaphor throughout all of this, and how it all works so well. Really nice.
| BaconFlavoredEverything 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Ah, love such a beautiful topic. I like the cheery feel of this poem and the last two lines were wonderful in describing love's ups and downs! I really enjoyed it! :)