Beautifully written.

That ends on such a great note. When it was all disappearing I thought it was going to end on that note, but then it became positive again and I really liked that. I enjoyed how the sun was used as a metaphor throughout all of this, and how it all works so well. Really nice.

Ah, love such a beautiful topic. I like the cheery feel of this poem and the last two lines were wonderful in describing love's ups and downs! I really enjoyed it! :)