Wonderful

I think this is a feeling many can relate to. Very well written

I love the title of this piece. Very powerful writing here

I really like this one :)

Ok this wasn't quite what I was expecting. The DO-? thing looks a little too panicky, but I suppose if your fiance won't acknowledge that they love you I would panic too. This seems very innocent for a love/death note though. In the grand scheme you've mapped out (or not), is double suicide the next thing to happen or something? Otherwise it reads like a normal lovey-dovey passage that happens to include the word "death."

DEATH NOTE! Although in this case it's actually notes, not a whole notebook. They should've called the show Death Notebook, but I suppose it doesn't have the same ring. A reference to the tragic lovers of Romeo and Juliet?

If you're not going to make a punctuation party out of this haiku, I think it's better to just type the "It" normally. It looks a bit off as is. Lovely depressing imagery.

oooh. Creative use of punctuation here. The colon in "staring" really adds to the image of two ogling eyes. The two v's instead of a w look sort of tipsy even as I'm staring at them. I don't like using the to substitute for n, it just looks too distended and like it's floating up there far away from the other letters. The bolded u in "our" I think is especially powerful; the haiku is from the POV of the humans, but the "u" is like a shout-out from the robot: "You guys could have cared. You could have helped me." And the {?} and & at the end seem to convey the robot's confusion as its wires go all haywire and it dies.

Nice. I like how the repeated "still," the lowercase-ing, and the absence of punctuation except for that one last period contribute to a really bleak atmosphere.

Hmm... Rather bizarre image. Are the radios supposed to represent worldly knowledge trumping the dolls, which symbolize childhood playthings?

Aww... that's really lovely. We all feel a little bit alienated at times, but it's good to know that there's a home for everyone. :P

Beautiful :)

Wow, that was good! I brings back nostalgic memories of Mexico gardens...
(Ah! Tibetan mastiff?! Yikes!)

This one is like Pyramus and Thisbe. Nice.

Your poetry is lovely. Sleepless is my favorite because I myself am an insomniac and knows how it feels to lie awake at night. I also like the double meaning of the poem- take another sleeping pill and sleep forever...
Thank you