I admire its poetry- rather than its confusetry, which people tend to think poetry is. Its implications are clear (oxymoronish, eh?), and it's not self-serving in the slightest. While it's nothing unique, no one said you set out for that. That being said, good poem.

I like the fact that you repeated the stanza as if it were a chorus of a song. It gives me a good mental picture of the scene. :)

Don't hate me but not your best work, it was good as I expected it to be, but I was slightly confused

This was beautiful! :)