I didn't like the pacing, I thought it was too rushed and you didn't take time to build the tension.
I also didn't like how little detail you had, I think you could have made it utterly terrifying with more attention to what was going on around her and her feelings on melting the wax guy.
I did like the idea though, it felt very original and definitely not your typical horror story.
Nice work!

Nice urban legend! This weekend, I had been reading a book about urban legends, and you mixed in the story about the murderer clowns with the babysitter/murdered children upstairs killed by taunting man (I forgot the name of the legend), I believe.

-Hermie