|Reviews for Emergence|
| LM4E 9/3/12 . chapter 1
A lot of imagery in here. Not gonna lie, I wasn't really following but I could tell it meant something and your choice of words really were beautiful :) keep writing!
| Ophelia Schmit 8/23/12 . chapter 1
It was good, but there's one mistake I think needs fixing? The last line says "reacting into teenage, elemental." I think you need to add or subtract something? If it isn't, sorry. I'm a 'tard, anyway.