And interesting start. Some of the terminology of the universe is a little puzzling, but that's something I would expect of any new read. You did a good job of making things quite intuitive though, which I think any novel of this genre needs for readers to be able to follow along.
It'll be interesting to see where you take this.

-L

Interesting, I would like to see where this leads. Well written, though I can't say much more than that till I see more.