awesome story! keep up the good work!

And... Bookending. I know its not the end of the story, but you brought up a point made earlier in the story. The boy. He obviously seems to know a bit more about G.E.O. than he's letting on, but doesn't seem to be too willing to share this information. Nice.

"As he ran off, I noticed two hand-prints burned into his singed into his back."
In this sentence did you mean burned into his back, or singed into his back?

It as worth the wait. Impressive chapter. Can't wait for the next!

FINALLY! It was a great and not to mention a long awaited chapter.

Love the story so far, it seems promising!

Agh! Nuuu! Cliffhanger! But good chapter.

Such a short chapter, but it was descriptive and a pleasant read. Update soon; maybe a little longer next time lol. ;)

Oh, and I wanted to thank you for taking the time out and reviewing my story. I greatly appreciate it. :D

I'm guessing she doesn't know what letters are which because she forgot from her past life. Past life as in before she became an experiment, not like she died or something.

Ooh... Tsk tsk... Stealing from labs. Not a very nice thing to do. Unless, y'know... The lab has genetically mutated you and us currently hunting you down... Interesting chapter. I like, and I shall await the next.

Where did she get all those pennies?

I'm still curious as to know who this mystery character is. He seems very interesting and I can't wait to see how you use and include him in your story. Update soon ;)

Intense and exiting. I like it.

Well geez. Doesn't he jump to conclusions fast. I really love this story, although I just started reading today. Its a great storyline, and an interesting idea. I approve.

:) Lot's of suspense!