Aww this was adorable! I loved the dialogue and how the two word sentences still said so much. I felt all warm and fuzzy haha :)

well what a shock it was to browse through stories and see i inspired one. this has got to be one of the best compliments i have ever received, so thank you. i really enjoyed your version of the story as well, though the beginning seemed a bit forced but as soon as they got talking in the living room, the story got really flowing. cute!