It's official. I am in love with Ani. Her character and comments are so funny yet naive (in a way) at the same time. She knowingly disrespects and holds her ground as the best she can. Continue writing this story, I am excited for the next chapter.

Ani is back! I adore her view of adults. Her seriousness for a child is quite strange because she doesn't seem to have had any traumatic experiences. Anyway, continue!

This gives a different point of view of the story. The flashback has something to with main plot or is it a side conflict? I like this chapter, but I can't help but miss Ani's unique perspective and thoughts! Can't wait for the next chapter!

It's starting to come along. I love the flashback at her school. It shows part of her mischievous behavior and smart-alack tone. Also on how it tells as if she is actually writing it (security guard incident).

I am impatiently waiting for more.

Sorry, computer problems. Great job so far!

I can the plot picking up from here! FBI is getting involved and they seem serious. I only wonder what you come up with next!

:D I like it! :D and it seems to be used properly! :) ahahahaha Cannot wait to read more! :D so happy!

:) ahaha i love this girl! :)

Wow! okay! ITS SO INTERESTING! i wanna read more! :) please update soon! :)

Ahah I like her, going to keep reading! :)

wow! that was quick! :P lol well, i'm going to continue reading! :)

GREAT. Keep it up and I won't be suprised if you have a trillion veiwers by the end of the story.

Well at least you wrote two very well written introductory chapters, but now I would like you to do the kindness of writing more chapters!

I am loving it so far. Hope more is coming soon.

P.s.- I love how I can now reveiw you!

Interesting story you have started. I do notice that the flow is slightly mixed and doesn't stay on a subject too long. It seems that the story is rushed. But besides that, this can turn into some intriguing story. Keep up the great work!