|Reviews for You and Your Dangerous Games|
| Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know 12/10/12 . chapter 1
Another awesome poem. I like the layout, almost as if the person narrating it is stopping for breath :D (If you read my poem "The irresolute hitman" (think it's that one anyway) I tried to do something similar mid way through) :D
Well done :)
| InfamousDaydream 11/17/12 . chapter 1
I swore I reviewed this, I guess not!
Really love the rhythm to this, the atmosphere is perfect very tense you can feel the fear!
| Born of Chaos 11/3/12 . chapter 1
In a scary, intense way, I like this piece of poetry. I can imagine the situation in my head as I read it, and my breathing even got heavier when I concentrated on each line! Nice work!
| Lia Jenson 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Oh, very nice!
Not often I find Horror poetry (which can be just as beautiful and powerful as regular) around here, but I'm glad I decided to take a look. It kind of reminds me of my only poetry piece "Better Than Water" but only a little.
It's the blood, see.
Yours has the panic of prey in it, and even some anger at being made to have to be someone's bleeding plaything. It's like she's trying to demean her assailant by calling his/her attack a "dangerous game." Like they are just a child, a deadly stabby child.