Oh wow, I wonder exactly what promises she's meant to fulfill for Tanner?

A new chapter, yay! :)

Poor Emrys, things have gone over her head. Yeah, it sucks having an idiot of a brother!

Willem's a pain .

Ooh, I wonder who is at the door. It must be so awkward for emyrs (how do you pronounce that anyhow? ) since she hates Matthew. Good job!

Another entertaining chapter. Its impressive how you've done your homework on wiccans (I had researched them when I saw them on tv) and I recognized the athame or knife. Great job. I havent spotted any errors and you have a good balance between dialogue and description. I really like this story :).

PS. Thanks for reviewing my story! I got some concrit reviews and I'm trying to shape it up. However, I have a magic story of my own if you're interested. You'll be getting another review from me soon!

Wow, this was really cool! I love how you have witches out in the open, that's new to me. You have a smooth flow and you handle present tense very well. I hope to read more :)

hello! Thought I might check out some of your stuff out of a sudden burst of curiosity and this is really good! I look forward to what's happening next. Loved the little prelude at the beginning!

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I really don't like Willem at all. Honestly, the guy is going to ruin the pack. Is Tanner the only outside or are there more we will meet besides the main family? Please tell me the rest of the werewolf clan aren't jerks! :P

It seems Matthew's death has taken its toll on everyone. You can really feel the emotions of the characters.

Hmmm...

I do NOT like Evelyn. Sheesh. And I feel bad from Emrys, her craft being used in such a way.

I wonder if that's true though? Do tanner's loyalty's now lie with Emrys? Kind of reminds me of a certain vampire from my story ;)

Definitely a sense of mystery surrounding this chapter! Who is the guy, and why is he following Emrys?

Hey, I'm returning your review for my story! You have a knack for vivid description, which is really good in helping the reader to picture what's going on. I liked how the Deputy Chief's surname was Verona - was that an intentional reference to Romeo and Juliet?

Well, good times came and went as fast as the candle flame in the wind. Hehehe. Maybe a good thing?

LOL I can imagine how Tanner might feel about a certain witch bottle :D bwahaha!

Urgh now I really have a dislike for Willem. And the wolf pack is totally okay with his treating Lilah like that. Hmm... I like how Ian got uncomfortable... I mean he's a cop!

The first part of the chapter made me lol, especially the 'tripped and fell' part :D

Hm, I just thought... Tanner still has the mark. If the priest or anyone tries to do something weird to Emrys, he has no choice but to help her. Right?

"quack of a priest" made me smirk lol.

What the hell just happened is that you got a thank you :P That was a pretty cool healing though.