Good...seems rushed though.
lol! Nazarius is almost the name of my town! Btw, hwo does Cassiel know what Nazarius is?
And is Sakura like his servant now? I mean, why does she bow at him and agree to showing him everything when she said no before?
It's an all right chapter. Could use more details and you could of had a greater reaction out of him. He seems to be taking that he's from another world to easy.
Keep writing!

ooohhh i love this story

I'm just gonna watch Nicholas being Cassiel's Dad! Yeah, I bet that'll happen!
And interesting story. I like it but I have still no clue what it has to do with them.
Also...is it just me or is Sakura changing? Idk...she just seems different and too nice.
AND WHAT DOES SHE NEED TO TELL HIM ALREADY!? If I was Cassiel I would of been like, "You told me to come here so you can tell me something bitch, now talk!"
Pretty good chapter except for a few spelling mistakes, but you could fix them if you reread the chapter.

I really like this :) please keep writing you are really good!

so sad D':

This was a crazy intense chapter, especially with the truck. Wow, I wonder what happens next.

Great chapter! But what is Sakura wearing that is so eccentric?
And y dosen't the little girl know about Arias death if she's her neice? I know its to protect her but, jeez, if i was her age my parents still would of told me!
Anyway, keep on writing!

Obviously he has a destiny. The imagery was very descriptive. I liked the part about his wings, but I think he really has them outside a dream. Maybe some sort of power?

You wrote this very well! Kudos!

I really like the name Cassiel. It is so fun to read. Great chapter, again!

The last sentence was good, but I think there may have been a typo. Good story! Can't wait to see where else it goes!

Wow, a chilling ending. So sweet and sad! I loved it! I don't know what you mean in your author's note, I thought it was a perfect cut-off (no pun intended, I'm sure?) with a lot of suspense! Great work!

Whoa. I am blown away! I loved this chapter!
It's just what did Tears and the mysterious man look like? All i know is the description of Tear's wings.
Tears is Cassiel, isn't he?
Anyway, great chapter! I am so looking forward for more!

What does the little girl look like again? I forget if you described her or not.
Also what does Jake look like?
Why was the little girl crying?
And what did Sakura do?! Disappear through the wall?!
One grammer mistake: "As time, passed" should be "As time passed"
Anyway, great chapter! I loved it! And Sakura's my fav character!

Please tell me there's not a "story part 3". If there is,I think your dragging the story out too long. Honestly, two parts is enough.
And I have no idea what's gonna happen in either story. I just know that that King is gonna do something totally stupid.
And what does the little girl have to do with the actual story?
Anyway, keep on writing!

Yea, horrible cutoff. You could at least finished the story! I swear, if he dies anyway, I'm going to be pissed!
And Sheaths sound like my Angels lol! I love Angels so it's all good!
Also, what colored hair does Sakura have? I just know that she has long hair and green eyes but not the color...
Anyway, looking good!