|Reviews for getting sicker by the minute|
| Lyra Kaji 11/4/12 . chapter 14
Dang, no...isolation is not helpful...
| Lyra Kaji 11/4/12 . chapter 12
You gotta let somebody in, girl!
And beautiful parallel structure, by the way.
| Lyra Kaji 11/4/12 . chapter 10
I love this book also...I can relate to the awkward foot-tapping at the edge of circles of dancing people. Never had a boyfriend...but watched everyone else with theirs. Anyway, there's so much going on in that quote about gender roles and isolation, and our definition of happiness.
| Lyra Kaji 11/4/12 . chapter 9
This metaphor is perfect! Really unique!
This is one of those really neat poems where the ends of the lines make their own poem: like gingersnaps, it's sweet and god-awful to fire your throat.
That is seriously cool; great poem, structurally and imagery-wise.
| Lyra Kaji 11/4/12 . chapter 11
This is a message that should be appended to the end of literally everything I post on this site...probably most of everyone else's as well...
| my.life.is.over 10/28/12 . chapter 13
| rust phoenix 10/27/12 . chapter 11
no need to apologize, and i look forward to reading more.
| rust phoenix 10/27/12 . chapter 10
you have excellent taste in literature.
| rust phoenix 10/27/12 . chapter 9
oh man, i love this chapter so much. i'm glad it's not over.
| True Talker 10/27/12 . chapter 11
It is all okay. Why? I enjoy reading your work and the things that you share. SERIOUSLY.
| True Talker 10/27/12 . chapter 10
This has made me think. It really has.
| True Talker 10/27/12 . chapter 9
| my.life.is.over 10/26/12 . chapter 11
i also would like to talk to you. if thats ok
| Guest 10/26/12 . chapter 11
i would like to talk to you
| True Talker 9/8/12 . chapter 8