| Reviews for Go Ask Alice Part Three of Reboot |
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brightsparke 5/15/13 . chapter 11Love the story, keep going! |
Kaws 3/2/13 . chapter 7I'm loving this series. I see that you haven't updated in quite a while. I hope this doesn't mean you've given up on the story. I just love the sense of ownage that's involved. One thing that you might consider if you ever write a similar story is this: There's quite a bit that's mentally not developed. In your story you have a kid thinking like an adult. I wonder if that would truly be possible because a kid's brain is not developed enough. For example, I'm pretty sure the character wouldn't really have the ability to think ahead. Of course it's hard to say since he has a more mature mind. |
SKeene1956 2/27/13 . chapter 2 Just a note to let you know you are still doing a hell of a good job. Really enjoying the series. Looks to me that you are one of the better writers on site. I'm a vet as well and can only wish that what you postulated for 'Nam" had really been stories flow really well and at the ends don't leave one confused as to what the hell they had been reading. Thanks for posting them here. |
LaLlamaQueLlama 2/13/13 . chapter 11You suck, stop wasting my sleep. Seriously, I'm loving it. Keep it up. |
Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 11 Great story. Keep up the good work and hope to read more on this as soon as you put it up. |
Guest 1/6/13 . chapter 11 Loved the detail in this series! Please keep writing, looking forward to the rest of the series. |
mwtheone 12/11/12 . chapter 11Good Story, i like it alot. |
Debate4life 12/9/12 . chapter 11This is an awesome story, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. I like how you work so many references into your story- feels like I was downloading at least Wikipedia article on *something* every chapter. |
Debate4life 12/9/12 . chapter 6We still use a numerically controlled lathe from that era at uni for our steel bridge- its what I learned on. The new ones make things so easy, though! |
iboardnut 11/20/12 . chapter 3Still reading. Can't stop. Good, very good. |
Phillip 11/12/12 . chapter 11 Great story. If only this happened in our time line. |
Phillip H 11/2/12 . chapter 11 Good story. Hope that you will keep writing. |
Tessa Nelson 10/20/12 . chapter 11 I usually strive to leave a review with more than "OMG Good!", but in this case I'm at a loss for any constructive criticism. As a non-military person, I find more recent chapters a bit more difficult to understand, but explanations are usually promptly provided. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
briva2 10/11/12 . chapter 11just read your work m8, good going, love it thanks ham |
NeWBeE 9/30/12 . chapter 11That was quite fun to read. I look forward to Mr. Takano's further developments and adventures! |