I am Sadie eye of Isis. I must say, I am quite intrigued on what you'll write about. You have captured my attention. Bravo :D

I liked it. Very visually impressive and good story for being so short.

I love the imagery, and the simplicity of the words and the format. It's almost like a poem. I like stories about zombies, they're always interesting. I like the ending too, just the right amount of suspense, so the reader wants to know what will happen. Update soon please :)
-AThousandPromises

I like this! I hope you write more! Something about the simplicity of the writing definetly intruiged me; I haven't come across many authors who can create such great work with so few words. This isn't a oneshot (or whatever it's called) is it?