What an amazing story with an amazing ending ;)

Wonderful. You should turn this into a novel, sell it on amazon, and get rich. Do it, i'd totally buy it.

And yet another story where two women end up with a child borne of rape.

In a story where magic is possible, I find that really unnecessary.

My favorite part was the girl going back for her thread among the "dragon bits."

Very clever and cute story, but what happened to the prince?

Very neat. I love how you use those repetitions just like a real fairy tale.

Lol! This is wonderful! You should totally make this an original story, make it longer, and sell it for tons of money.

I especially liked the part where the prince ends up falling for the stable girl, only to get rejected in favor of the princess lol.

This is a perfect Fairy tale.
Thanks