|Reviews for Thieves of my Heart|
| Felrain 11/19/12 . chapter 10
I love this story! Keep up the great storyline!
| Jin 11/13/12 . chapter 10
I don't read you A/N :)
| TheGhostChild 11/5/12 . chapter 10
I absolutely love the entire concept of this story. I mean.. a polyamorous relationship between handsome pirate men? Why isn't this seen more often? Or maybe I'm not looking in the right places. Either way, BRILLIANT idea.
I'm very excited to see where this goes. You're a very good writer, but you seem to question yourself a lot. If it's up to your standards, if you like it that's what counts. There is bound to be others who like it too.
Now you asked where this story should go. I have never written about pirates, but I like them. Have you thought about if and how Rylie will become a crew member? Maybe he can do something to make James feel extra special. Like tell him something that resonates with him so he won't be jealous. And maybe they can teach Rylie how to sword fight. He can learn a lot about himself on this ship. His worth, how tough he is, his sexuality. He can prove to himself that he's more than what his family thinks, more than a Dey. He's a pirate. And a damn good one.
Sorry, I got carried away. I just really loved this. It sparked something in me c: Don't doubt yourself. You're a writer, go with your gut. Good luck!
| Ditto123 10/9/12 . chapter 10
Lol, yes we do. Or at least I do :))
| Kafuka Megumi 10/9/12 . chapter 10
| LoveIsDead98 10/9/12 . chapter 8
But that's bedside the point. I love this! Keep it going please !
| LoveIsDead98 10/9/12 . chapter 10
Iiii do. I read them, though they could be a little shorter...
| magnanimousSquirrel 10/8/12 . chapter 10
I do read the notes.
| LoveIsDead98 10/2/12 . chapter 1
:( awwwww there's no more! MOOOORE! Ppplllllzzzx. I love this story!
| Lovefremione 10/1/12 . chapter 9
It's completely impractical and I love it! I can't wait to see what Rylie makes of the truth of their relationship, and I really really want to see Alec spank James for being an over dramatic drama queen. Not to mention I'm intrigued to see what leads to the teaser prologue that started this story.
| magnanimousSquirrel 10/1/12 . chapter 8
It does sound interesting, this new sci-fi story. It's sounds very original as well.
As for names...you should use the weird letters of the alphabet, like x and z and q and w and maybe p.
You could have a few names that don't have vowels in the usual places. Like...Dzxa (jzheeya) or Qllo (chee-yo) or...something.
You know what you could also do? Open a Word document and type randomly without looking the keyboard. Then you can pick out some random words that sound like they might be names.
Example: ubgjbaecvbe ereu as z zbcakbec averhwrf awfb eveoiherfea oihnvsevikv velsihv svswrlioh wfiro awedw qwxd caivw wciaevre eqroijqgepin vefohn arowihv oinvae pihvf pinver pjvw pinhvw azas aacacvcenha cacsdc qqkww zxk And then pick some. Like Wfiro, Vefohn, Pinver, Azas, and Zxk.
| midnightwrighter 9/30/12 . chapter 8
I'd really enjoy reading this story and the one you just gave a summary on to answer your question :)
| frappuccinosweety 9/30/12 . chapter 8
Countinue the story
| Ditto123 9/30/12 . chapter 7
Oh no, please keep on writing this! I don't usually read BoyxBoy stories, and most of the times I stop reading it after the first few chapters, but I really want you to keep on going with this! It's actually really good :))
| Kafuka Megumi 9/30/12 . chapter 8
I think you should write it :) but don't write when he's in the spaceship by himself for to long - it would get boring - make him sleep then. And wake up as a space ship bumps into him :) and for thieves of my heart - you should take a break from it and return to it once you've cooled down about it :) that's what happen with my story captivated in his eyes - a lot of months later - maybe a year - And like 3 other stories later - I returned to it because I have more experience from waiting and reading to know what to do next :) that's what I advise you to do because it worked like a charm for me :)