|Reviews for The Silent Musician|
| GayMuffin 2/3/13 . chapter 25
Wow. It was amazing. If i ever become a movie director, i want to turn this to a movie! Haha! But really, amazing story. Great job!
| Hayley-Bug 1/30/13 . chapter 25
I actually really liked the way it ended. You didn't expect it one bit and that's what makes it unique. Everyone had a tie to her, she and D&M's relationship tied a lot of people together. It's a twist that none had anticipated. I love it. If I could rate it, it'd be 5 out of 5, definitely. :) Can't wait to see what else you can bring to the table in the future.
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 25
I can't believe it's over :'( gonna miss waiting and bugging to find out what's happening next chapter :( loved the story still my fav. Couples ever are Mar. And Dan and Nadia and George :) such a sad ending :'( I wish Bryrony could have lived till prom ad graduation :'( but overall an amazing story and I am gonna miss it :) so goodbye The Silent Musician goodbye :p
| Sarah-Brighteyes 1/27/13 . chapter 25
I liked this story.
are you sure its over? lol
I know its reality to have ppl not make it in a relationship out of highschool and into college but its a little depressing lol especially since d and m seem so in love! reality bites hahha
I love your story though and b dying is just another reality check and warning to others!
Good story! I think you should fast forward ten years and bring the chars back for a reunion! :)
| Sarah-Brighteyes 1/27/13 . chapter 24
oh my gosh! I did not see her dying :(
| MerlinRocks101 1/27/13 . chapter 25
...WHY! Girrr i loved Bryony, she was awesome !
Anyway really great, hope to read more soon ;P
| Rainlesshope 1/26/13 . chapter 25
Great ending... but. still no. .
| everyone'sfavoritenerd 1/23/13 . chapter 24
No! You did not just kill her! I love your story, but NOOOO!
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 24
I can't believe Byrony is gone :'( I'm gonna miss her it was envoy able it was gonna happen but she was so young :'( I feel so bad for Brian they only just got back together :'( :'( :'( so sad :'( but on the other more positive side of the story I 3 mar and dan they are the cutest couple ever XD XD XD awwww Nadia and George are gonna move into together 3 they are also a match made in heaven as oh
Say XD XD XD I don't want the start to end :'( oh well I guess we have next chapter and it better be good ;) but I guess all good things come to an end eventually :p xxxxxxxxxxxx
| Sarah 1/22/13 . chapter 24
I don't know what to say... wow, this is really good, you really shouldn't doubt your own writing it is amazing. :)
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 1
I LOVE YOU BABE HUN
| Guest 1/21/13 . chapter 1
First impression is good. The lack of quotation marks is rather glaring. In fact, most of the grammatical issues seem to center around speech. Sometimes you won't put correct punctuation at the end of sentences in quotes. There are also a lot of issues with spacing, like having no spaces after a period or putting a space between what should be a quotation mark and the final word of speech. Abbreviated titles (Such as Mr, Ms, Mrs, etc...) require a period after them. There are some misused commas and areas that require them, but those are only apparent on closer inspection. I noticed a few run-on sentences as well. The better share of these errors are very minor, and I didn't catch anything further.
As for the story, it feels like you throw away a lot of the tools of characterization when you set up characters in an area separate from the story itself. It is the difference between show and tell, really. I can't comment much on the rest seeing as this is only the first chapter.
Now, with the criticism out of the way, I actually have high hopes for this story. While there are a few annoying grammatical errors, you also demonstrate a measure of sentence structure and vocabulary that exceeds most of the stories on this site. I find that the premise interests me as well. I encourage you to keep writing.
| Sarah 1/21/13 . chapter 8
Just so you know, personally I love Nadia, no worries there form me. :)
| GayMuffin 1/21/13 . chapter 7
Aww! The ending of this chapter(7) is cute, with Danieel dancimg. I'ts amazing so far!
| Anon E. Mouse 1/21/13 . chapter 24