|Reviews for The Centurions: Greco Academy|
| KaomixRobyn13 10/14/12 . chapter 9
Gettin' me all worked up like that :P
Yet again Another great chapter,
i think Raven's gonna win! ,one simply does not just Fight a Wilde Raven ,Psssh Dosent happen ,no matter How Cool you're name is haha
| Twidled-String 9/14/12 . chapter 1
Listen, I've read both your stories, and you're writing could use a bit of improvement, maybe an expansion of vocabulary - along with the usage of connotation for a more 'story-like' effect.
But what you need to work on is your storyline and character development, you need to add a twist, create connections and generate drama through situations that aren't life-or-death. You need to layer your story with intricacy, something that makes it different from regular ones.
I also suggest that you look in a thesaurus, it'd be helpful with the vocabulary. Well, that's all.
| KaomixRobyn13 9/13/12 . chapter 8
ive been wanting to read it ,still been busy haha
Love the chapter though!
| KaomixRobyn13 8/29/12 . chapter 3
gona read some more! :D
| KaomixRobyn13 8/29/12 . chapter 1
mr drake sounds like he's gonna be freaking bad ass , i dont know why lol
it's Realy good!
on to the second chapter! :D