Awwwwww how cute! Poor little kitten *heart breaks* id take it home *looks over at Nightmare* want a new playmate, kitty?

The kitten sounds really cute! The way in which this story was told from the point of view of the kitten is really interesting. Hope it finds a home and a name :)

I like how it's from the kittens point of view; it reminds me of my cat when I found her in our shed. Could she have been wondering the same things? The only problem I see is that you need to continue, unless it's done, in which case it's perfect.