yellow is seen as easy prey
but yellow is the sun
it is the strength that gives life

so yellow
stay the way you are

This is really nice, I like it a lot! Write on please :)

Anna

The rhyme scheme at the very end got to me... The stanza
"so small perfect rose..."
until the end was really touching and was what I'd call a "cool rhyme".
If you'd had that kind of scheme throughout the poem, it
would've been perfect.

It's really good, though. Keep writing! :D