I love how the narrator talks with the ceiling. To me, the ceiling represents what she used to be before her wife was pregnant, but that probably is far from what you were thinking. It's slightly humorous, too.

The ending was sad and somewhat depressing. Nothing went right for the character in the end.

No grammar errors. Great heart-wrenching stuff. Had me on edge.

Thanks for posting, Pulsie
-Sapphire

Wow, what a sad story. I loved it. I loved the way it flowed nicely i can sense the emotions vividly. The ending was not expected but somehow I never saw this scenario getting any better, but just wanted to say thank you for writing this. Good job.

Wow, that was profoundly depressing - but well done. A good exploration of a terrible situation. The accident at the end may have piled things on a little too much for me, but geez, good job.

Wow, that was emotional. What she did was wrong, and on top if that she expects her wife to be okay with it! Good story, it was well written!

How sad. HOw can the other woman expects that shes happy about having a son like that? makes me angry.