Stonehartdreamer27:
I don't think it was at all rushed! Once again, amazing. I cannot wait to read more of your poems! If it would let me log on I'd add you as my favorite, but seeing that I can't at the moment, I'd just like to tell you to keep up the good writing! This was so easy to relate to and beautiful. Keep it up!

Aww, this is so sweet! I love the rythm of it too, it makes me think of the way the sea moves :) Perfect. Keep writing!