|Reviews for Top Ten Reasons Not to Fall for Your Bandmate|
| BitterSweetShimmer 8/29/12 . chapter 1
OOOH I like!
| not Ross 8/29/12 . chapter 1
regarding writing in third person: it's hard to make the transition from first to third person (I had to switch to third and then back three times before I got it down), but being so used to writing in first person is, I think, very helpful when writing third person. In third person, it's so easy to get lost in narrative and forget that you're actually writing about a real person (90%), but once you're so used to getting into the character through first person, it's way easier to write engaging third person! All that to say, kudos, and I encourage you to push forward - but not too hard.
Useless pearls of "wisdom"... haha anyway, no comment on the actual story so far, but I'm subscribing to see what you do with it. :)
| Gabby726 8/29/12 . chapter 1
Okaii.. First of all HI! Alright lets get down to business...hehe... I 3 this story already it's super cute! I love it like seriously it's awesum! Im already really liking Aaran (is that how u spell it?) anyway please update soon(: