|Reviews for Dangerous Traveling Companion|
| Jason Bloom 4/24/13 . chapter 22
Well finished, with a few incongruencies. Is her name Erin or Kari? Because you called her both.
| Carmel March 4/20/13 . chapter 22
Ah! I can't believe it's over. I absolutely loved the way you decided to wrap things up. I really couldn't have asked for more. I just want to thank you for writing and sharing this story; it's been a privilege and I always, always looked forward to updates. I hope you have more stories to come! :)
| Carmel March 3/21/13 . chapter 21
Gah, I just love your writing. It feels like watching a movie sometimes. Like the first part where you switched between Edward and Mitch, it just flowed so easily.
The scene between Edward and Kari ("I'd like it to become our home.") was fantastic and so amazing. Just the best. I can't wait for the next update!
| Carmel March 3/8/13 . chapter 20
Favourite. Chapter. Ever. Words can't even explain how much I loved this. Everything was done perfectly. Absolutely amazing job on this, and I cannot, CANNOT wait for more.
| Carmel March 2/27/13 . chapter 19
AMAZING job on this chapter. I love how you weave between the different characters' storylines with such ease, going from Greg to Edward and Kari. I also loved this line: "and his grey matter hit the walls in a spot on impersonation of a Jackson Pollack painting." It gave me a complete mental image...not a pleasant one, but still!
Keep up the fantastic work! :)
| londongirl123 2/8/13 . chapter 18
I officially love this story! I'm shocked that it has few reviews because it is definitely worthy of more! :) I love the story's opening because it confused me and made me have so many questions - that sounds crazy but it is what made me hooked to this story. I absolutely love the connection you have written between Kari and Edward - it's not been completely smooth sailing because they are on the move but that makes it interesting. It also seems that there are two story-lines happening, one between Kari and Edward and another including Adam and Greg. This has been written really well and I am looking forward to reading more of this. Wonderful job! :D
| Carmel March 2/8/13 . chapter 18
This was really and truly an incredible chapter. The way you had Edward recount his past was great. I liked how you balanced the present with the past. And the details of Edward's memories were so vivid and so well done. I just love this story so much! I'm looking forward to more!
| Carmel March 1/29/13 . chapter 17
Absolutely fantastic chapter, as usual. I'm so glad Edward opened up to Kari and the pieces are falling into place. And Rose sounds...incredibly daunting. I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to an update!
| Jason Bloom 1/29/13 . chapter 17
If you don't mind me saying, I love your writing style. I also like the way you develop characters who are so horribly smarmy, greedy, and rude it makes my skin crawl. As honest as dishonest people go, I give it a 10.
| Carmel March 1/10/13 . chapter 16
The two of them just make me want to melt. I love that Kari is happier and having more fun. And I'm such a big fan of Edward. You're really developing him as a character so well. I can't wait for an update!
| Carmel March 1/5/13 . chapter 15
I just love seeing a new chapter from you :) This chapter certainly didn't disappoint. I loved their interactions. Looking forward to more, as always!
| Carmel March 12/20/12 . chapter 14
Yesss, I can't even tell you how happy seeing an update for this story in my inbox makes me! Those two are just so adorable and perfect. I loved the line: "Just wanted to say good morning." Haha, he's so cute!
Update soon! :)
| Carmel March 12/16/12 . chapter 13
I love how their relationship is developing more and more, it's amazing how you do it in a realistic and believable way. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Carmel March 11/21/12 . chapter 12
I apologize to no end about reviewing so late. I finally got a bit of time to catch up on this story, thank goodness!
This whole story is right up my alley. I love everything that happens! That protective tenderness that Edward showed was really sweet, and made me love him even more. I hope you update soon! :)
| Carmel March 10/21/12 . chapter 9
Fantastic! Fantastic! I can't even tell you how much I am enjoying this story. Please update soon!