Hi, it's me! Angie J Trifid from FF! Just thought I'd let you know, I'm gonna make an account on this site under the name "Angiesaurus"
Not much of a review, sorry... just thought I'd let you know

To Whom It May Concern

Hello, dear reader of my best friend's fanfiction. I am THE Chelsea mentioned in this story, and I would just like to point out NO EYES WERE MADE on this date. This fic was loosely based off actual events, but most of the events were real. Such as the leaving of the cinema (minus the flyswatter part), the handholding, and the kissing in the fabric section.

Yours truly,

Chelsea.

PAIGE, Y U NO CHANGE NAMES?! *blushes*

I wasn't expecting the narrating to come from an actual fly on the wall, that was a funny twist. I thought you did well to write in persona of a young girl - the age came across well.