Love the "crack!".. as if this word is the only separation between our reality and the reality of dreams and myth. Excellent work I must say!

I like this poem, but the 'Crack!' sets me off. I love that burst of sound, but crack? I think there are better sounds to use. But other than that, great poem.

I love the 'crack!' it's like there was a crack right there, and it was a surprise actually. It adds a lot more to this. I enjoyed reading this haiku, it was nice to see one about a unicorn.