|Reviews for I'm All Yours|
| alltheeagles 1/21/13 . chapter 6
I looked it up, and yes, it IS the Mariana or Marianas Trench. Whoops! So sorry. A good writer should do all the background research for factual stuff.
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 6
The part where it says "deeper than the Marina Trench." Is that supposed to be Marianas Trench? Deepest in the world?
WHY ARE HER NANOBOTS IN HIM? I need a new brain. Possibly a larger, more comprehensive one.
I'll read the rest later. Promise.
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 5
My brain isn't working too well. Is this the REAL Zech? Or is it Zomb-Zech? Oh, the mind-easing sensations of breaking the rules ;P Not that I do it often.
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 4
They're going to fall in loooove. I can feel it. Actually, no. She'll fall in love with him and when she FINALLY gets him back, he'll return the feelings.
I shouldn't get my hopes up.
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 3
I get it now. I think I do, at least :p Her Zomb is Zech, who was supposed to be her friend, but she made him into the aforementioned Zomb. Now, she's trying to get him back to the way he was before she did so and somehow, he's going to return to normal!
Forget that last part. You enjoy making me believe something incredibly cliche, then turning it around so that it's completely unexpected.
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 2
(I'm going back to review the chapters I've already read :)
Progenitor is the term for parent, I'm assuming?
| 4everandalwaysme 1/21/13 . chapter 1
Oh Lordy. I've been proven wrong once again about how creative you can be.
| InkedGirl 11/3/12 . chapter 14
Ahhhh this is the best ending!
Seriously, I love your style.
You managed to keep both Zech and Allegra so distinct in their separate voices...and the chemistry between the two of them is just amazing.
| InkedGirl 11/3/12 . chapter 10
I love their interactions. The characters are so unique and interesting, especially Allegra.
| InkedGirl 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Wow. This sounds great so far! It's so creative and interesting. I just want to read more. It's different from anything else I've come across.
| Kaidyen Nemerah 10/15/12 . chapter 15
I like all the ideas and am fond of the characters as well. :]
| bloodlore 10/2/12 . chapter 2
Just starting out with your story here, and I actually like all the information and terms you jam pack in this story. And I like the fact that I don't quite understand it. Reminds me of the author Robin Mckinley.
| Kaidyen Nemerah 9/6/12 . chapter 4
I actually enjoy discovering what the terms mean by reading the story. It's doesn't bug me, but some might find it a little more difficult to grasp. I like inferring the meaning, and for the most part I feel that I've got it figured out.
Still enjoying the story, it's really intriguing. The situation is definitely a difficult one, and I can't help but hope there are other alternatives than those she has considered.
| alltheeagles 9/3/12 . chapter 3
Thank you for reading! Do you think it'd help if I explained the techno terms? I'm actually not a techno person, I just pick up stuff from the techno-ish things that I read.
| Kaidyen Nemerah 9/3/12 . chapter 3
I have to say. For knowing a grand total of zero about your terminology or world, I like the fact that you literally throw the reader in headfirst and leave it up to us to gather what the hell is going on. Such a rich world from three chapters, and very rich characters. I'm still a little lost on some terms, but as with most things I'm sure becoming familiar with them is all it will take.
The dialog between characters is very involved... and comical. Good read, look forward to more.