really cool. could maybe be a bit longer. i know you only do short poems but this is maybe to short..? but still... im lovin it! ,

There were a few spelling errors. "Believe" "shaked" should be "shook" and "I" should always be capitalized. Other than that this was definitely simple and could've had more substance to it and more depth. Amateur-ish in my opinion but not terrible. Keep writing. you can only get better.