LOVE IT . ;P

Dootdoot NO! Lolz i need more PLEASE ;P

Great execution on the FPOV. Worth learning from.

... more please!

O.o ... oh no no no no ... gahhhh you .. you .. cant just stop there! NEED MORE NEED MORE NEED MORE lolz ...please :)

Ooh, ending with suspense I see. I can't wait to see what happens. I do wish Anna spent a little more time deliberating on her decision, but I'm looking forward to what happens next. I find it weird, though, how different Harley and Hannah are. Harley sounds so much older than her, but they both still freak me out.

Oh my gosh, that was such a touching ending to this chapter. I never wouldn't guessed Anna's memory would have been taken away 0.o Sometimes it takes me a few seconds to realign the generations of family you refer to, but that's to be expected. I'm rooting for Mason and Anna even more now!

Oh no, I wish Anna could tell at least Bethany and Emma what's going on! I'm so rooting for her and Mason though, I don't like Simon very much for some reason! This story is really refreshing. I haven't read anything like this in a while, so thanks!

loved it :P

oh my gosh how dare you! lolz please write more!

So, she found a way to get her power back? How?

Ooh... I wonder what Simon knows?

O.O NOOOOOOOOO! please oh gosh please write more GOSH DARN-IT !

I got to thinking and I was wondering why in the heck this story only 13 reviews... Then I remembered that I haven't really been helping that fact either... I'm a horrible reviwer and I know it. However, this story is amazing and I love where you're taking it. I can't wait to read more!

Confused. Was it Simon or Alex who showed up with the car? (You mentioned that both had electric green eyes, but considering the fact that Alex is a ghost and he doesn't even know what a computer is, I'm leaning more towards Simon...)

Well. Now that that's out of the way... I have really enjoyed your story so far! I'm not usually one for ghost stories, but this is awesome! Please update soon!

- Sarah