Love it! So much! It's creepy but cute at the same time. Does that make sense? And a little eerie too, because one of my teachers...his name is Tyler Robinson too! Ah! Coincidence. Anyways, great job :)

I love it! Update soon, I can't wait to know what will happen. :3

Kind of confusing...but keep writing. It's..interesting.

Your story has piqued my interest. I'm going to read on.

This is great! Write more :)

really good. cant wait to hear more. (i did read the entire story)
please continue :)

i have read this whole story and it is AMAZING! i love how the characters feel for each other. and the plot behind his reasoning for it. please ccontinue!

oooh, the plot thickens :)

I love this story! Although chapter 1 is kind of short but in my opinion, I don't really care, but some people like it longer. I'll read the rest later because I'm busy but I like it so far. PLz continue! ;)

Baby bird wants more. NOW. In other words, put up new chapter.

I really like this. Serousely, it's really good. The only problem is that you need to add more

Nice job! It had great timing, and I didn't see any spelling/grammar errors.

Post more soon!