From the first word to the last one here in this chapter I was drawn in. Very well written can not wait for the next chapter.

Few spelling mistakes and some missing words but over all very well written the same with the poetry. Keep at it!

I've read the first 9 chapters and this is one of the best stories I have read. You are such a good writer and your story provokes so many emotions. I really hope this has a good ending.

Nooo... I... no...

I know it had to happen to deepen the story... but.. no...

Wonderfully written..

I actually cried a single tear...gosh I know this is annoying saying it but...damn it to hell I can't help it please please please please update. This is better than any professional published book I have read, and I have read many, I never cried from reading anything, and this actually did make me. I'm too speechless at the moment to give an actual review...sorry.

Really sad realistic story. I hope she gets her happy ending.

I swear to god that if she attends det and her sister gets raped i will never read this story again.

Some people are real bastards.

love this chapter. the teacher at the ends reminds me so much of my psychotic tec teacher it's unreal. This story is progressing really well. I really like Mrs Craven's character, she seems the right balanced between concerned and scared of reporting anything wrong.

I don't think there are many people who get the balance between character construction and plot right but i think you definably do.

Well done! best of luck

Oh no, Jett will be on the hunt. I hat , and once again you kill me with a plot twister. Argh, this is going to be horrible for them isn't it?
But I had a heart attack when I lazily looked through email and saw an update. Things are starting to get really exciting!

I Will kill Mr. Tristan myself.

So I think. Neils parents should take ALL Four of the kids. Just saying. All of them. Just like that. Mine. D.

When I read this I was completely shocked to find it had so little reviews. When Molly was angry I felt angry too, This is amazing. The way you had Mrs Craven see all of it. I am beyond excited for the next chapter. I love how long your chapters are. This is...it's a cliche but everything about it is fresh and original. The beginning was perfect, with the diary, it adds to the fact of how bad it was. There really isn't anything I can say other than I loved it. The story itself, characters, the twins, Neil-I love his family. The names are creative and great. Description and emotion, wonderful. These last two chapters had my heart pounding, when it ended I noticed I had my jaw clenched, eyes wide. I will die waiting for an update BUT fear not I will stay strong and live until the day! No matter how long it takes!

Ohgosh.. you are an insanely good writer. This story holds so much pain.

Your words portray a world so close to my own. It hurts. But you are doing it so well. I can't wait to read more

I.. this spoke volumes to me.

" There's nothing worse than knowing, and feeling your father steal your virginity. There's nothing more painful than carrying that sickening, shameful deed on your shoulders every day, while kids around you joke about things just like this, or about having perfect dads. Or even when kids start saying how they're having sex. Especially with older men. No one realizes that rape in itself is like a two-hundred pound weight on your shoulders. Rape as a child makes it three hundred. But you add incest to that? Might as well be a thousand pounds. It's all but impossible to carry on after that. Especially when it's a periodic happening. There's never a chance at ever being normal. Never a chance to be able to love after an act so dirty."

No one.. understands.. but this? Summed up all my feelings about everything.. And what I still feel... Your story hits valid points... Im off to read moer now..

This is such an amazing story, it gets better and better as you read it. There's so much intense emotion