I have to say you have a remarkable talent for dialog, Hollywood could sure use writers with your talent in that regard. I'm really getting swept up by your prose and will continue to read on. Great chapter, totally got absorbed.

What an excellent starting chapter, you paint a marvelous word picture I dare say and I cannot wait to see what the rest of your story holds for me. I must say that your style totally engrosses and you can almost reach out and touch the scenery and talk to your characters, great work!

I am TRULY IN AWE BY YOUR MIND. I REALLY AM. Thank you for sharing this MASTERPIECE. Yes, I SAID MASTERPIECE.

Reading this makes me think. Also.

I can't help but think when I read this. Apparently I am thinking a lot about the same thing.

Interesting and it had made me think.